A word from Laura Kalpakian:
For eighteen years, the ideas for this short novel have
hovered over my imaginative life. I began developing Caveat almost
immediately upon reading a little article in the Los Angeles Times in
1980, about a flood in 1916 occasioned by a rainmaker, and the city’s refusal
to pay him unless he accepted responsibility for the damages the flood had
wrought.
Why notice
of this 1916 event should have appeared in the L.A. Times, I have no
idea, but I tore it from the paper and carried it with me in my wallet till it
disintegrated. I knew instinctively that this rainmaker’s story suited the
central themes of all my work: the past, its power, and the individual’s
ambivalent need both to escape and to embrace it. Moreover, the historical ramifications
of water and drought have fascinated me from the time I first began to write
(especially since my favorite fictional terrain is the desert town of St.
Elmo). From reading that small article, Hank Beecham appeared to me almost
instantaneously: I could see him getting off the train at the St. Elmo station,
greeted by Art and his cronies.
All this
was fine, but it did not make the writing any easier. I knew that to
understand, to approach an individual as complex as Hank, both the narrator and
the reader would need the balance and the humanity offered by Lucius Tipton.
But in utilizing setting and characters from These Latter Days, this new
novel had to be placed within the framework already imposed by the earlier
book. This was too daunting.
These
artistic considerations aside, I first began to write Caveat at a time
when I could least concentrate; I had an infant and a preschooler at home, and
I was still suffering from difficult domestic upheavals. So I wrote some fifty
pages and put them aside, certain always I would return to this material. Not
certain when.
Four or
five years passed before I reread the script. In the meantime, I had written
the novel Crescendo (1987), some of the stories in Fair Augusto
(also 1987), and some of the stories in Dark Continent (1989). I began
earnest work on Caveat, and over about a year, I wrote it through all
the way to the end. I wrote over and over to the end, and I was
moved, but not satisfied.
Before I
next returned to writing Caveat, I did extensive, if erratic, research
on the very thing that Hank had learned from Jeremiah: that after every battle,
rain ensues. Indeed, my research bore this premise out. And so I needed to know
more about meteorology and gunpowder than I might otherwise have ever thought
necessary. I am no chemist, but I believe the ingredients of Hank’s secret
formulas are correct, as is the “phossie jaw” he eventually suffered; it was an
ailment common to workers in match factories, people who handled phosphorus
over a long period of time.
The bit in
the L.A. Times had mentioned that the rainmaker got his ideas from
listening to the stories of his father, a Civil War veteran. For a novelist,
“Civil War” is too broad; the novelist can only invoke the universal by evoking
the particular. I chose the Battle of Shiloh for reasons that were personal,
historic, and artistic. After all, the word Shiloh means “place of
peace” in the Bible, a cruel irony given what happened that April in 1862.
Moreover, this battle, so early in the war, could have ended differently.
Unlike many of the later battles, the Union victory at Shiloh was not at all
assured. Quite the contrary. As a battle, Shiloh continues to be rehashed,
re-thought, refought in armchairs and textbooks, the subject of quarrels both
personal and academic. Indeed, the only certainty that emerged out of Shiloh
was that the war would be long and bitter and hard-fought.
In
researching Shiloh (the battle itself, the armies, the commanders, the music,
what the troops ate and wore and suffered), I read volumes about General
Patrick Cleburne, who I found an absolutely fascinating individual. So much so
that for a time I considered writing a novel about him, but settled for making
General Cleburne a presence, even a sort of thematic tuning fork in Caveat.
And though the nocel takes place in St. Elmo, I wanted it to echo larger and
more tragic themes. Thus, I placed it carefully in November 1916,
contemporaneous with Pershing’s pursuit of Pancho Villa in Mexico and the
Battle of the Somme, that months-long inconclusive bloodbath fought in the
trenches of northern France.
Not until a
few years ago did I once again put the manuscript of Caveat into the
typewriter. As I made significant structural changes, the book enlarged, the
story deepened and broadened. In the intervening years, my notion of Hank’s
character had changed. And when his character changed, so did his fate. Miss
Emmons changed, and far from being a wisp in Hank’s past, she became a powerful
force in the novel. Lucius Tipton, however, remained as he has always been, as
readers of These Latter Days have found him: tolerant, wise, whimsical,
passionate, a man of capacious intellect and understanding, though impatient
with humbugs. Lucius Tipton is one of the great challenges of my writing career:
it’s very difficult to create convincingly a character who is smarter than the
author.
Editors
at John F. Blair did my novel a tremendous service with their questions and
considerations. I again did a major revision in the fall of 1997, and now, eighteen
years after the idea came to me with such force, vivacity, and color, it will
see print. I’ve long since lost the tattered article from the L.A. Times,
but surely I was meant to have read it. Caveat has enriched my
imaginative life, one of the books I care most passionately about.
Questions to consider:
- How do
the different characters in Caveat escape and/or embrace the past?
- Though
they are both long dead when the novel opens, Hank’s parents, Jeremiah and
Eulalie Beecham, are central to the story. Their portrayal—or at least
Doctor’s estimation of them—alters, shifts throughout. Is there a final
assessment of either parent? How culpable are Jeremiah and Eulalie?
- How
important is family to Hank Beecham?
- What
is the role of Shiloh in Caveat, and why is General Cleburne so
pervasive in Hank’s life? How is Cleburne’s death significant to the book,
and why does no one but Miss Emmons seem to be aware of Cleburne’s last
battle?
- Describe
Miss Emmons’ notion of integrity. Is it at odds with Hank Beecham’s notions?
With Lucius Tipton’s?
- What
role does landscape play in this novel?
- What
did Hank Beecham want when he returned to St. Elmo in 1916? What did he
want when he returned in 1924?
- In some ways, this is a novel about forms of
destruction. How are connections forged between fire and rain, war and water,
drought and deluge?
- Describe
the marriage—and divorce—of Miss Emmons and Hank Beecham. Though he left
St. Elmo with no farewell, why did Hank summon Miss Emmons to Texas to
marry him? Why did she divorce him? Is there something in their unlikely
union that transcends time and convention?
- Are
Art, Otis, Lew and Sid justified in their refusal to pay Hank $50,000,
given his own caveat?
-
On what is the friendship of Lucius Tipton and Hank
Beecham founded? Does it change over time? Why does the whole town believe that
Lucius is somehow implicated or responsible for what Hank does? Is he
responsible? Why, in the end, does the
doctor keep his silence?
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